Eternia - needs staff

[Rovick]

yay!! I wanted to post the first base i made, i didnt put ears and tails so i can add different kinds when needed, please give me advice on what i need to improve, what mistake i need to fix.. Btw the base colors is by kyittas (Heres what it will look like when colored) thanks! I really tried the best, and its hard to draw with a mouse, a great thing is i am using kyittas's sketches for my adoptable so it will be alot easier, this one took 1-2hrs (idk)

[Hwona]

Not bad for a first. :3 However, you might want to work a bit on making your lines a bit smoother and your curves a bit rounder. As for shading, maybe make it more noticeable like putting more shading?

I don't know the pose this adoptable is supposed to be in, but if it's supposed to be standing flat on the ground, I think some legs are a bit shorter than others. And don't forget the snout! :D



Made a really quick redraw:

Note: I think I messed up on the back flank. XP