@squiggler,
Thanks for the critique! The jagged parts are supposed to be very fine "fur/feathers" they've grown. It does look a bit harsh though so I'll take your suggestion and try to soften the edges with a greyish color. Also I didn't draw the other flippers because I figured the second one would be covered by the first flipper closest to viewer, and the third one is so small it wouldn't be seen. I MAY be able to fit the second one in there, just a little, so I'll see how it looks! (:
And I agree with the shading on the 2nd main flipper. It's horrible. I definitely plan on fixing it up before releasing them on my site. :P
@Kyttias,
Thanks! <3 I'll do lighter outlines for all the others and see if it looks alright! (: I'm glad you guys commented because I can fix this stuff up before they're released! c:
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