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Old 02-21-2014, 06:33 PM
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Well, having been to your site, the images are a bit big for signatures. I like the clear and bold lines; that might make them easier to shrink if you want.
The mask vs. bare face is a bit jarring, but as long as there are multiple varieties, it should be fine. I definitely like the color choices!
The action poses are pretty dynamic, though Mask seems off balance. It's really hard to dodge backwards and punch forwards at the same time. Dodging and then punching would work, but take extra time. Punching with the back hand while twisting to the right (forward) wouldn't, so raising the left hand might work.
For Bareface, having the back arm out straight puts them off balance. Bending it even slightly would help. Limbs are rarely straight when fighting because it makes you rigid and it's easier for your opponent to break them.
When creating further action poses, it helps to play out the poses yourself, or watch fighting competitions and even exercise videos- yoga for example.
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